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Through the doors of the impossible

Swiming

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26/01/2014, 22:44
Tommy Olsen

-Do you think that giving them food will be enough? We still don't know how to take the key. Maybe we grab that thing while it is eating...   added Tommy, who had been very quite since they had entered the last room

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27/01/2014, 13:53
Esteban Rioalto

Well...thats a new...Esteban has seeing something simmilar on the T.V before but this was somehow even more disturbing...

Abigail please give them more and the others will move to take the key and run to the door before any of them even notices...suggested Esteban making some steps to the key..

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27/01/2014, 22:07
Narrator

"OK! I'll try it." The girl said, happy for not having to touch the animals. She took another piece of bread and threw it.

The "octopus" went flying to the bread, moving their tentacles and making weird sounds.

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31/01/2014, 16:18
Abigail Willocks

"Take it!Take it!" Abigail said. "I won't touch them"

She said it whyle she carried on throwing the bread.

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31/01/2014, 18:21
Esteban Rioalto

Ungh, UnGH!...Esteban gulped down his own disguste about touching the gross and sticky covered key but he give a step ahead and took the key with two fingers, ready to leave this place as soon as possible, this damn bugs were grating on his nerves and he was in the verge of screaming like a little girl much to his embarrassement...

He hates this ugly bugs for petes sake...no problem with other but this were simply scary as hell...

 

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01/02/2014, 10:15
Nicholas O'Banion

Nick was surprised to see how disgusted were the others about the bugs, strangely he found them quite interesting and... He wouldn't recognize it but they were somehow beautiful.

Notas de juego

Sorry for the short post, I'm traveling now. 

Anyway opinion on the bugs is genuine. 

=)

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10/02/2014, 21:43
Narrator

It was as if you put your hand in a mug full of jelly. Esteban took the key and cought it.

But, suddenly,all the bugs became to  scream, with a hight tone, as a blackboard were been scratching, and they began hitting the children. Abigail screamed and started to run here and there trying to keep away the animals.

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11/02/2014, 17:19
Nicholas O'Banion

- Nicholas pushed Abigail to the water, just to make her fall into the water - to the water! Everyone! - cried Nicholas. He run to the shore himself after throwing Abigail. The bugs won't be able to swin so the would be safe, at least for a while - Esteban swim! - cried the kid from the water while trying to keep himself afloat and calling the other one by his name for the first time - to the door!

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11/02/2014, 21:43
Esteban Rioalto

Ow?..Estaban blinked and waved a hand when he felt the first bug hit against his temple; he shuddered from the sudden contact with his flesh.

OW...ow, ow, ow..OOOWWWW....scream the boy runing to the water after heared Nick calling him; hugging the key to his chest he start a quick and panicked run into the waters; there could be demons lurking in the waters, anything would be better than being beaten to death by a bunch of flying bugs.

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15/02/2014, 13:55
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All of you ran towards the door. The bugs were buzzing and flying as mosquitoes, turning and turning around the children.

Esteban ran as quick as possible, stumbling over the sand. He approached the door and put the key in its hole, opening it.

In front of you, there was a stone yard, surrounded by old columns and green ivy.

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17/02/2014, 13:17
Esteban Rioalto

Esteban pass through the door and simply laid in the stone floor wheazing and disgusted beyond words.

Just a minute to catch his second breath and continue, this last riddle room has been his worst nighmate made flesh or bugs in this case..for gods love that has been utterly disgusting.

I hate bugs! proclamed Estaban massaging the bump in his head where the bugs hit him fiercely, I truly hate those things...

 

 

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17/02/2014, 14:35
Abigail Willocks

"So do I" she said, going throught the door.

 The bugs hit her in several places, and one harm of her hurted a lot.

"Well, it seems the bugs can't go throught." She said, pointed at the door, where the little "octopus" were trying to cross the gate.

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17/02/2014, 16:09
Nicholas O'Banion
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I'm sorry to post a bit late, but:

All of you ran towards the door. The bugs were buzzing and flying as mosquitoes, tourning (turning) and tourning (turning) around the children.

Esteban ran as quick as possible, stumbleing  (stumbling, to stumble) over the sand. He approached the door and put the key in its hole, openning  (opening) it.

In front of you, there were  (was, singular) a stone yard, surrounded by old commmuns  (columns) and green ivy.

Notas de juego

I hope it's useful to you although it's a bit late.
 

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18/02/2014, 21:47
Henry Bradley

Well... It seems like they won't bug us any more I said. Then I realised how bad that joke was and felt ashamed of myself. I'm sorry... I whispered while looking down. After recovering a small part of my dignity I began investigating the place in order to see how could we continue our journey.

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19/02/2014, 16:41
Esteban Rioalto

Seriously? smiled to henry for the bad pun but he appreciated the humour

So...Columns and green ivy...well, no bugs thats a plus...no idea where we are thats a minus...so..anyone ready to explore this new place? asked to no one walking at a leisure pace to the columns still massaging the bump in his head.

Dirty bugs, they hit hard and it hurts...fortunately didnt look like its gonna leave a mark.

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19/02/2014, 18:20
Narrator

Henry begin to look, searching something that could be useful. And, between branches and leaves of ivy, he discovered a pit, an old pit made of stone. It had a lion head, dark and fierce, looking at nowhere with its stone eyes. It look like to be looking at the bottom of the pit, where the water was. Maybe it was thristy and the pit turn it into a statue.

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19/02/2014, 18:28
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Thanks! ^^

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19/02/2014, 18:30
Nicholas O'Banion

Nick arrived to the coast and the door just a bit later than the other kids. He just wanted to look at the bugs for one last time, it was easy as they were occupied trying to bite the others but not him, because he had learnt to dive with his friends some buddies at the public swimming pool during the afternoons while his parents were out working.

He crossed the stone door and stared to the columns. He was just about to start walking between them when he suddendly stopped, looking suspiciously to them. Perhaps he had learnt something about hidden dangers after all.

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19/02/2014, 18:30
Nicholas O'Banion
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Editalo ahora si quieres

Henry bagin BEGAN to look, searching something that could be useful. And, between branches and leaves of ivy, he discovered a pit, and  AN old pit made of stone. It had a lion head, dark and fierce, looking at nowhere whith WITH its stone eyes. It seemed  LOOKED LIKE to be looking at the bottom of the pit, where the water was. Maybe it was thristy and the pit turn it into a statue.

Notas de juego

It seems to me - me parece que (a mi, yo soy el sujeto, el observador)

It looks like - parece que o se parece a (el sujeto es el objeto, que es semejante a otra cosa o persona)

(Creo, como siempre)

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21/02/2014, 12:37
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¡Gracias!:)